Copywriting: The Final Frontier in Using the "Written Word"
to Speak To Your Potential Customer
Writing Your Guarantee Statement
Part 4 of 5
by Kevin Hogan
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Outline the Details
When making a guarantee, it is important to outline the details
so the buyer is clear on any restrictions. The process of
returning an item should be easy and it should be hassle free.
This should be written in the guarantee in the copy.
There was a time when I charged a restocking fee because if we
got something returned it would almost always be in unsaleable
condition. Thus you lose a significant amount of money on a return
as it takes as much or more time to receive a return as it does
to package and ship a product in the first place.
However we got more returns when there was a restocking fee!
So, we switched to a 110% guarantee which was taken advantage of
MUCH LESS often.
Now, in 2007, I don't really think about whether the return will
be 0.2% or 1.2%, I just write what I believe will make new readers
comfortable doing business for the first time.
Our experience is that once we've got a customer, we keep them
for life. So because I bust butt to make sure that what goes into
a kevinhogan.com program is unique and valuable, I know that
if the person actually uses it, we are fine and will do well by
that customer.
This isn't true for bigger companies that sell numerous people's
work. They have to operate on a different set of parameters.
They have to sell their programs for lower prices and have to
offer full guarantees. Then they will have up to 20% returns.
And they've planned for that.
If I see a package returned I usually make sure it's defective
or it's hard to imagine why I would want to go to the trouble
of letting the person do business with us again.
You'll get there too.
It is very important when writing the guarantee that you
make sure you tell buyers that making a return is not going to
be hard. You tell them exactly what they will need to do.
Of course, you do not want to have to accept returns. Sometimes,
though, no matter what you do some people will be unsatisfied.
Sometimes they simply want your program and want their money
as well.
MOST people are honest...thankfully.
Your guarantee is really for those people and for the people
who might otherwise choose not to buy the product because they
do not want to take the risk.
Some people are very worried that if they buy something online
and are unhappy they are stuck with it. A guarantee helps to
ease their concerns and make their decision to purchase easier.
In these cases you will find the majority of time the people
end up happy with the product and never even need the guarantee.
However, just having that option available is enough to cause
them to have the confidence to buy in the first place.